We all overcomplicate recipes when starting out, but yours looks pretty good and appears to have cleared well. I'd love to taste it!
While I had a bit of contact with CAMRA in the old days, and used to date a member, I believe beer is for drinking and if it tastes good and you can keep drinking it for several pints it's a good beer. So I actually like Kilkenny for a winter beer - a bit too heavy for summer when I might need a half dozen pints if working hard - and might try your recipe, though a partial mash. It's the right time of the year to lay down some winter beers, right?